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    dots Submission Name: 5thdots

    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    And then it came back to you
    The one I can't leave behind
    I can't make up my mind
    so close
    so far

    Submitted on 2010-10-17 22:46:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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