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    dots Submission Name: 6thdots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    baby...how can I say this
    You were the one that was there
    You were the one that I thought cared

    If only you were closer
    You couldn't be any closer to my heart, dear.
    Left me cryin...wishing I was dyin..




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