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    dots Submission Name: 8thdots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    On and on
    Of and again
    Just the one I need
    when I need you
    Always there
    And I do dare
    to say I care
    Those blue eyes make me stare




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