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    dots Submission Name: 9thdots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    My shoulder for crying
    My older bro
    Though I get jealous
    I don't let it show

    I don't want to loose you
    I wasn't the first choice
    always runner up...
    I talk you through life
    and you walk me through mine




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