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    dots Submission Name: The 10thdots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe 10thdots
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    The one I joke with
    You're going down the wrong road...
    Can't I help bring you back?

    Like a brother
    not the older
    not the younger
    like an equal

    Who gets the punchline

    Listening to heavy metal
    you know all the lines




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