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    dots Submission Name: 11thdots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    We climbed the jungle gym
    we raced across the field
    You hugged me
    and I held you close to my heart
    nothing was said
    nothing was done
    the hearts we sent faded with the setting sun
    though we're still friends
    I miss the idea of you
    You never hurt me
    and I don't think you could




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