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    dots Submission Name: Loves you notdots
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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/137/75
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLoves you notdots
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    Time goes by, you feel alone
    Never knew to feel at home
    Many times of lost control
    When you wake up in my soul.

    Talk to me, I know another...
    Smile at me, I feel the bother,
    From so far away in places
    How your lips are kissed, no traces.

    Always in my mind, the heart
    Never gonna be apart,
    Words like night, like ice, like rain
    Loves you, wonder, no more pain.

    All my wishes, all my hopes
    See you now, and see you close,
    Much to say, so there's embrace
    Touch your feelings, caress your face.




    Submitted on 2010-10-20 14:31:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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