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    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    23/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 48/129/125
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsInfra Digdots
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    While looking through the glass
    To black
    I happen to see the watery shape of
    My reflecting eye
    In lowly lit lamplight

    Peachy contours of despair
    Emerge

    No noble dignity comes with age
    Only rage
    And withered old terms
    From withered old days

    Days we kicked through the autumn leaves
    Freshly fallen
    Crisp with antiquity
    Trudging through it on
    Happily

    Autumn is earths full ageing face
    Complexion in the goldenamber
    Fires light Octobers airy grace

    Id steel all earths beauty
    Form core to breaking crust
    And give to some ugly stranger
    To watch them shine awhile
    And watch them slowly turn to dust






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      I felt drifting and nostalgic while reading this
    I thought the flow was great
    | Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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