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    dots Submission Name: nonsense poemdots

    Author: istalkmurdoch
    Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129/48/25
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I don't know, I just wrote it and I like it. It doesn't have to make sense....

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    dotsnonsense poemdots

    putting thoughts into words
    is difficult for me
    some people can write
    as free as can be..
    I have to think about my writing
    my mind is right here
    staring at the screen
    you could kick me in the rear....
    I wouldn't've felt it
    no matter how hard you tried
    you'd keep kickin' and kickin'
    you'd've probably cried...
    your leg would've fallen off
    there'd be lots of blood
    it wouldn't be red
    it'd be the color of mud
    like the mud when it rains,
    the ground gets pelted real hard
    you realize later on
    you're missing a yard....

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      I love writing random poems things I can just write without though, actually works for me lol but this ones nice short and to the point ;0) nice job!
    | Posted on 2010-12-05 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
    I know how you feel... some people just write because no matter what they say, it just flows like honey, "sweet and laid on thick" like they don't even try! It's frustrating.
    But with practice...
    My English teacher a few years ago, quoted some guy (I forget his name D:) who said that "Poetry is the best words in the best order" and I have never forgotten it.
    Best of luck with writing! Everyone gets hiccups and soon we all find out our own beat to bounce to!
    | Posted on 2010-10-22 00:00:00 | by EshyFishy | [ Reply to This ]

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