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    dots Submission Name: Coffee and kittensdots
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    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Happy
    Total Views: 495
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    Bytes: 95



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       Early mornings in my home.


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    dotsCoffee and kittensdots
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    Coffee brewing now
    Kittens up and down the stairs
    Sun peeking, day starts




    Submitted on 2010-10-22 13:37:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha!! Thats funny. Thank you for making me smile.
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 00:00:00 | by Midnight_Toker | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like a new and typical day. One thing for sure, kittens sure liven up a house! Everything and everyday is a new one to them!!

    I have a lot of cat poems at my site. If you like kittens, there are quite a few kitten poems there.

    Nice work!

    | Posted on 2010-10-22 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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