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    dots Submission Name: Yawdots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    63/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1055/396/115
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsYawdots
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    Lushly lustful exotically erotic
    Vibrant virile fertile vicissitude
    Puissant terminus loquacity photic
    Pique piquant poignant pulchritude

    Lecherous visceral longevous cohort
    Wanton licentious erogenous frolic
    Lurid lascivious coital cavort
    Bawdy lewd apomixis anabolic




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      What Daniel said.
    | Posted on 2011-03-26 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      i would not print an imitation tattoo of this, lick it and stick on my shorts....

    however, i do appreciate that there must be relationships from word to word and that likely there are some gems.

    when i am working on something i like to do, i imagine that if someone were watching it would be like witnessing an autistic person working the numbers.

    there's something mathematical and musical in writing

    and so the biggest i get out of this poem is the joy that you as a person must have taken from crafting it.

    that joy shines through in your working the numbers.
    | Posted on 2010-11-20 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      seriously, did you like find a way to upload dictionary.com to your brain. wow. this is quite clever in the relationships. the language is a struggle. but i don't mind. i guess that's half the point. it's slightly satirical of poetry having 10,000 dollar words. but it works, so it's enjoyable to either way you take it. but come on, next time, find like one word i don't have to look up. any of these ones would work. this is probably a good way to extend vocabulary though. so i guess i'm someone elses you and you're just the people who had my language skills now, and before that stuff like this was just like random words i can't pronounce. if you talk like this in real life, i'd be faking any understanding i showed. if i fake it well enough, though, what's the difference? (jk) fun read. it would be interesting to see you actually just try less. get more journalish. idk. you don't have to make up words or juxtaposition suffixes that don't belong at the end of them though. that's my thing i have it copy-writed. that's all my blabber for the moment.
    | Posted on 2010-11-01 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      Pitch and yaw...
    exactly what I did between this poem and the dictionary!
    But, it was worth the effort. I like pulchritude, that's a corker.
    (sounds more like an edict than a compliment)
    This is an interestingly suggestive back and forth of alliteration and stream of consciousness...
    someone been sexting?
    (joke)
    Thanks for the read.
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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