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    dots Submission Name: In My Darkest Hourdots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 543
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1011



    Description:
       ~ For Sammi T.

    The basic meaning behind this one is that I'm a sucker for this girl. And I most likely will always let her hurt me even though I know who and what she is.


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    dotsIn My Darkest Hourdots
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    If the end were near, and I had a select few to choose.

    In my darkest hour, I would choose you.

    Through all of the pain you have caused,

    Through all of the pain, It would always be you.

    In my heart and in my mind,

    In my head down my spine.

    If only for a bit, A moment perhaps.

    My love for you would never relapse.

    If only you saw, the things you do.

    And how the torment hurt me so.

    Maybe you could see the side I keep,

    Hid under lock and key.

    'Cause baby you know far too well.

    How much you mean to me, so send me to hell.

    I love you with all my heart,

    Maybe even more.

    But you will never see,

    How much you have hurt me, and my heart you tore.

    And in this my darkest hour.

    I give you my life, my soul, my being to devour.




    Submitted on 2010-10-26 16:08:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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