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    dots Submission Name: Father and Sondots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 706
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsFather and Sondots
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    There are no ways to say how you are sorry
    If all the words you find seem too cheap
    The world of lies has not given your heart the vocabulary
    The world of deceit does not want you to weep

    What if a man were to stretch
    Reach out his hand and touch
    If the soul inside him
    Could speak with his real tongue what would that man think

    There are no ways to say how you are sorry
    No way to explain the hurt you feel
    There are no ways to grasp how deep you can go
    No way to tell someone else about you

    Sometimes it seems like you’re cruising
    Sometimes it may seem you just don’t fit
    Sometimes it seems as if everyone’s on your side
    And sometimes you just don’t get it

    They teach you a game of survival
    And I was never there to show you
    How they lead you so far from yourself
    How they will rape who ever you are
    Replacing love with something else
    But you won’t know who; when they leave you with their scar
    Then drowned you in the image of someone else

    You have to learn to fight without your ego
    Learn to fight without your fists
    Learn to fight with the man inside you
    Learn to know just who he is

    There is no way to say you are sorry
    Not if the action is missed
    No way that words can ever show other people
    Everything you feel inside your heart

    Sometimes it will feel like you are burning
    As if you just don’t understand
    Sometimes if everyone you love has deserted
    Left you alone to figure it out
    Sometimes in the times you just can’t sleep
    Something calling to you from the deep
    And all the love you feel just keeps on hurting
    Do you wonder if it’s real


    There are no words I can find to say how I am sorry
    Nothing I can do which reaches that far into me
    Nothing but a silence
    We strips me to the core
    I just can’t tell you how I feel

    I look at you and I see me
    I see the man you could be
    I see the someone who stretches beyond
    All the limitations I have become

    I see a man of compassion
    A man of strength and protection
    I see a man who exceeds his wildest dreams
    I see the man who is more than just my son
    A man who stands unabashed and unafraid
    To face the world as he truly is
    Standing in the bones of his own two feet
    A man who doesn’t need to be explained

    Sometimes it will rip you
    Cut right deep into your core
    Sometimes you will feel as weak as a new born baby
    And you will wonder what and who you really are
    When you have torn yourself
    Free
    Of all those masks
    When you touch upon the man
    The one you really are
    Living inside you
    When you know who you really are

    I see a man of intuition
    A subtle man of understanding
    A man who reaches for his wildest dreams
    I see a man who is more than just my son
    A man who looks beyond his own false promises
    A man who sees who really sees just who he is

    You won’t find any words to say you are sorry
    When your action speaks louder than your tongue
    You won’t need to use apologetic words
    Nothing will cut you this deeply
    Never wrong is the alphabet they taught
    Learn to be wrong instead
    Learn to love without regret


    There are no words I can find to say how I am sorry
    Nothing I can do which reaches so far from me
    Nothing but this self taught silence
    Striping me to the core
    I just can’t show you how I feel

    I look at you and I see me
    I see the man I could become
    I see this someone I dreamed of once
    A man who stretches beyond all the limitations
    I have become




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