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The depths

Author: concrete_rose
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I need some feedback on this good or bad maybe a little help on word play
just a very quick write 5 mins tops!!

The depths

Discovering the truth about ones self
Can almost always be exhilarating, surprising, interesting
The promise of a brighter future equals happiness
Realizing the self is strong and powerful:
Against the evils of this world
There is no greater knowledge

To once be drowning in the sea of miseries,
And then pleasantly washed upon the sands of recognition
The realization that there isn’t need for uncalled for desperation
There are many chances
We are all worth something to a greater power extending our own selves.

We all must reach down into our bosoms
And claw away our own insanities that drive us mad
And cause us to spiral away from the sun
And lift ourselves up into the skies the clear blue apparatus
Cleanse our failures and be wiped clean to start again.


Submitted on 2010-10-28 23:50:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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