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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: DiNoDaNeH
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 10/17/31
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 384
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsLovedots
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    Pain and regert,
    love and forget.

    Sorrow and mindless,
    Caring and kindless.

    Twisted over,
    and upside down.

    This world reverses
    into a house of love-struck clowns.

    Family love,
    just flying like a dove.

    Love is a feeling,
    don't be ashamed of revealing.

    Tears will be shed,
    But your heart will never be mislead.

    Follow your heart,
    and you'll never be apart.




    Submitted on 2010-10-29 07:41:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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