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    dots Submission Name: Mind of Eternal Minddots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 349
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsMind of Eternal Minddots

    Heart impassioned this soliloquy of fractal
    Where design imprinted within the corpuscle
    And there it echoes

    Asleep in the arms of the eternal

    A slow and agonising beat
    Grips within the hidden deep
    This dependency on so many explanations
    Written by and for the material appeal
    Of all its complications

    It cannot release you

    And all the covetous needs of ego
    Render the soul
    To images of paint and powder gloss
    All the emulations of sunsets
    A tinsel
    In their party pretty dross
    Cage and comfort of mind in mind
    And mind within the mind
    Mind of eternal

    And so the imprisoned will never know
    The shackles of the slavery
    Or their birth into eternity

    Monkey mind

    While the empire of fear
    Holds its governance noose, with eloquent excuse
    About the necks
    Of a global populace

    And blind is but a contrivance of hate
    To perpetuate the rape
    Selling children to an empty dream

    Every word of beauty
    And even one sip from the cup and the grail of could be
    Would change the destiny
    Of fractal motes
    In paths made twisted on other worlds

    Mind of Eternal Mind
    Where your entire indenture to suffering has written
    The un-truth
    And discarded you
    Denounced every dream you aspired to

    By guilt and by fools
    They have chosen to lead you

    Of all the beauties nestled in the arms of the Universal
    Should you seek to gain
    Your rightful place
    And let loose your hold
    On the petty embrace
    Of this “nothing more”
    They gave you

    Can you ?

    Think you un-given to pondering
    How the wrapping ornamentations un-lead you no-where
    And pealed back the layers of please, please me
    And find that it is all, so easy
    To explain

    Heart impassioned this soliloquy of fractal
    Where design imprinted within the corpuscle
    And there it echoes
    And the footprints of you
    Are left
    In the mind of mind eternal

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