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    dots Submission Name: Pimpeddots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 538
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    Some of the darkest parasitical souls in our society are the people known as pimps
    Existing without conscience on bloated ego’s
    They feed like maggots on an ideology of exploitation
    Their sole concern, the collecting of money for their own comfort
    Often using a threatening belligerence, drug abuse and violence
    For a slave trade in women who have no choice

    They swagger in their self-important finery and 3000 dollar suits
    The sick pervert providers and supposed protectors
    In their market of the flesh
    They are the epitomised reflection of society itself

    We are all pimped

    But the disguise of those who use us is carefully designed
    It is hidden behind facades on local streets
    The glass front institutions of abuse
    The all connected self-rewarding parasitism of the banks
    Their currency of prostitution
    The currency we use

    The big bosses, in their pampered overly sumptuous rooms
    Seated at their banquette for a feast of vampirism
    Disguised behind their painted tarted brothel keepers
    Called our governments
    These psychotic, misogynistic, misanthropes
    Have their blood-sucking needles sunk deep into the veins of our world

    We are all pimped

    Made to sell what ever we have
    For an illusion of life and happiness
    While every benefit of our labour is taxed
    Every comfort we earn is bought and paid for
    A mere paltry excuse for the wealth of others to enjoy

    A lifetime enslaved to the institution of money
    Paralysed by its hypnotic sense of need
    To the capitalistic greed of those who steel our resources
    Who claim their ownership of our world

    And like mindless slaves we acquiesce to this lie
    Judging each other in amounts and degrees
    By all the outward appearances of a mediocre affluence
    We think it defines our success

    There is nothing successful here
    There is no success or pride or honour
    In being extorted and exploited
    As we are robbed of our hearts and souls
    For worthless pieces of paper
    We are belittled by the things those bits of paper make us do
    We are demeaned and degraded by a plush falsehood
    A dream, which we will never attain

    As we are reduced to criticism of the world around us
    And reduced to the moments of happiness
    Which come in-between the sadness
    Just doing the job, nothing more, nothing less

    There is nothing they won’t do
    To pimp us

    Under the sly guise of health they feed us addiction and drugs
    Drain our will and then offer us a pill
    With entertainment they brainwash us into fear
    And strangle hold upon our sustenance
    While they spray poison chem-trails into our air
    Dumb us down, re-educate, and rearrange historical fact
    Indoctrinate our children so they can do it all
    Again and again through every generation

    Then they sit back and laugh
    Pat each other on the collective elitist back
    And wait
    Rubbing their sick avarice in psychopathic palms
    And wait
    For the bucks to come rolling in

    Laughing at us
    All of them
    Laughing their way
    All the way to the bank

    We are all

    Pimped






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      "We are all pimped"
    Now that I think of it, it is an absolute true statement or saying dealing with every aspect of growing American life critically dealing with the individual based on fraud, lies, currency, greed, morals, self esteem and more other issues that play key parts in all of our lives so I can see why this was so deep and your pursuit to go in on strength of giving truths of society, social ills and darkness that lingers out there with fair warning to raise awareness about money at the root.
    Giving a sharp summary the type of people many Americans hate or dislike, pimps.


    "There is nothing successful here
    There is no success or pride or honour
    In being extorted and exploited
    As we are robbed of our hearts and souls
    For worthless pieces of paper
    We are belittled by the things those bits of paper make us do
    We are demeaned and degraded by a plush falsehood
    A dream, which we will never attain."

    This tackles the point concerning history through labor of the workforce, industrialism, modern times etc.
    Excellent put together analogy about a terrible philosophy that determines whether people will be good or bad human beings even though they as a single person in this country are nothing but a number depending on the existence of public records such as contributing to society circling around another word you mentioned in here such as, tax.
    Well done job of getting down to the spiraling "in your face" deliverance of actual facts and what is wrong in todays world throughout.

    Oh and by the way, this time there was no intention of leaving commentary totally unnecessary and the thing to say that would be somewhat apologetic is that people grow and realize what ignorance they have contributed to the world in a way big or small.

    RG
    | Posted on 2010-12-31 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      mmmm see i cant help but praise your work this is amazing the compairson between the 2 and as usual i want to say its too long personally id shorten it but then i thought about it and what is there to take away nothing i can't see it being any better if it were shorten its just how i see it this is another great post you've got it and for being posted 4 days and only two comments makes me sad but within time pple will see this is worthy of their time yet another my going on my fav's

    I LOVE THE ENDING

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2010-11-07 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      What an interesting read. The analogy is perfect here and I couldn't agree more. Especially "Under the sly guise of health...." bit. It's a pity we continue to walk blindly, following one after the other. Just like lemmings ignorantly taking one step after another to their doom simply because the person before them did the exact same thing. Thanks for posting this, aside from a grammatical error here or there I have no critique to offer just appreciation :)
    | Posted on 2010-11-04 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]


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