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    dots Submission Name: rap =Ddots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 24/50/56
    Words: 377
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 507
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2412



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       psh forget poetic beauty, this is just me messing around ghetto straight up


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    dotsrap =Ddots
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    I'm settin' here at my desk
    No sweat dripping down my chestttt-ed
    Cuz unlike you guys
    Halloween I wusn't arresttttt-ed
    Feelin so rested
    Even though tomorrow I'm getting tested
    Should be studyin'
    But all these numbers be muddyin
    Mah braaaain
    Biology in the membrane oozing
    in and out driving me insane
    Chemistry with its butane, methane, triproylnonane makin me wana do cocaine
    Calculus dryin me like a drain, wishin it would rain some knowledge in mah brain
    All these numbas and shit lookin like cucumbers
    Tryin refrain from bein profane
    But those intergrals be stabin me in the jugual vein
    May not be profane but sure as hell can't can me mundane
    I'm irregular like an isosceles triangle
    Always pointin down the jeggular
    Don’t care if you secular
    Or molecular
    Sucks if that guy is your creditor
    Beatin down the door like some kinda messenger
    Don’t give a shit what is the temperature
    I know I didn’t just make sense but when do rapper need to make sense the they make cents
    This college shit is like a head hunter
    Shootin bullets like the preditor
    Slamin moves like a wrester
    Gotta keep from drownin
    Don’t forget accountin
    Bills and bouncin
    Grades gougin and arousin
    Food is frownin
    But gotta send it down in and start poundin
    Aight take a break from this buuull shiit
    Slam down somin smooth like a banaaaaana split
    I ain't from no hood
    Don't know shit bout popin caps
    Or dealin mishaps
    I ain’t going to suck
    Cuz yo buddy got a nice ass truck
    And definitely won’t go fuu
    Get where I came from
    Heart beatin like a bass drum
    Gotta find out what I wana become
    Can’t succumb to the rule of thumb
    Not here to make some fancy album
    Just wana have fun
    Life just begun
    Gotta go with it and run to sun
    Like free birds tryin to outrun the machine gun
    Don’t be rerun
    Like fresh prince and Mrs. Jackson
    What do you think have just begun or am I done


















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