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    dots Submission Name: Say it until you believe itdots
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    Author: MrBear
    ASL Info:    19/M/Ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 59/109/48
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 793
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 651



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    dotsSay it until you believe itdots
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    say that you want it,
    say that you need it,
    even if it isn't true,
    say it 'til you believe it.

    tell me you want it,
    tell me you need it,
    say it 'til you believe it.
    say it 'til you believe it.

    tell me you want it,
    tell me you need it,
    even if it isn't true,
    say it 'til you believe it.

    tell me you want it,
    tell me you need it,

    say it 'til you believe it.
    think it 'til you believe it.
    love me 'til you believe it.


    ~ Teddy Dayton ~




    Submitted on 2010-11-05 02:45:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, I hate this. Understanding the feeling, I mean. I enjoyed the poem.. Though, I could do with a little less repetition, as in the second and third 'stanzas'..
    | Posted on 2010-11-07 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]


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