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    dots Submission Name: We're halfway there...dots

    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWe're halfway there...dots

    A funny way I have of running from a feeling
    strictly speaking it is a certain way of being,
    lest pain transmutes to rage and blinds me
    like all those other few times, deceptively...

    To breathe in rage is not fear per se,
    I loathe to see myself falling this way.
    Return to my violent heart calling, or feel...
    Release seems so easy when it's not real.

    I hate being angry and I hate being sad,
    Seems like it's hate that's driving me mad...

    Submitted on 2010-11-05 03:48:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is very good and i know how you feel. I think the format is very good and that it flows very easily it is definitely a unique poem.
    | Posted on 2011-06-25 00:00:00 | by madsmurph99 | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm, this is very raw. hate can be something good. can drive people, i guess it depends on where you put it. violence is uncalled for, well i guess two dudes fighting of mutual fault is ok, but i did just get done reading a poem which may have me thinking of different contexts. idk man, what is it exactly that you're hating? seems like you're hating the hate which sounds like frustration to me. point me to some other piece that's more specific in this topic.
    | Posted on 2010-11-11 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen to that, its the unholy fuel that keeps us kicking at times...
    | Posted on 2010-11-07 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      Hate is all that holds me up sometimes.
    Recent tragedies untold, a friend in Atlanta called me crying his eyes out, shaken to the core over the travesties of my life, the loss of his newly-found friend, but that he knows I'm okay because I have "a river of hatred" running through me that keeps me flowing always in life's pushed directions. He meant it as a compliment, so to speak. I simply hated him for telling me the truth.

    When love kicks you in the face, friends disappoint you, and the bullets fly, you'll always have Hatred to keep you going... crazy or not.
    | Posted on 2010-11-06 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]

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