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    dots Submission Name: I am (to Lydia)dots
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    Author: nicodemous
    ASL Info:    7-5-82/M/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    5.58 - 283/221/121
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI am (to Lydia)dots
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    Please don't look at me and see
    What it is you see
    But the potential of what could be

    I am

    A work in progress...




    Submitted on 2010-11-06 11:26:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aren't all men? :-)
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