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    dots Submission Name: Insanitydots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 763
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 622



    Description:
        Ten reasons of death

    1. Old age
    2. Wrath
    3. solitude
    4. Emptiness
    5. Despair
    6. Destruction
    7. Intoxication
    8. Insanity
    9. Greed
    10. Sacrifice

    Eighth -- Insanity

    U HA HA HA HA HA - let me skin you alive...I want to see you smile that way.....


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    dotsInsanitydots
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    Ah so this is how you smile,
    why are you crying my dear, It's only the skin that is not there.
    Enjoy your pain as this is your last.....

    I wonder what it feels like, where you can see your heart trying to beat,
    how does it feel to breath the last breath of yours now,
    I am not crazy, this is just a different perception of mine,
    to show you how I feel inside.

    The stench of blood, mmm so nice,
    Oh so thats how the human body looks like,
    So nice to see you smile now.
    Look at me,
    Look at me...

    Now smile.......




    Submitted on 2010-11-07 02:05:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      meh. cutting thing. meh. sounds like you're joking. idk. seems like it should be 6 before 8. though i guess destruction is insanity.
    | Posted on 2010-11-07 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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