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    dots Submission Name: Look, Stare, Live, Studydots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Spoof/Serious
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       just how i feel


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    dotsLook, Stare, Live, Studydots
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    Look at me and you'll only see the apperence I allow you to see
    Stare into these eyes and then you'll see the pain I carry with me all the days of my life
    Live a night in my shoes and see just how hellish my nightmears truely are.
    Take a picture
    Study it cloesly
    You come to find my sprit is gone
    My faith in the Lord above left me long ago






    Submitted on 2010-11-07 02:18:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sadly, I can empathize with this very well.. I've lived with this pain for so long that I've even begun to mentally refer to it as my sickness.. I don't know about you, but, I haven't had a horrible life. But, I always feel alone, I enjoy almost nothing I do, and I am so rarely happy that I doubt I could describe the feeling. I've thought many times that if someone could be in my head for just one day that they'd probably end it all or finish losing their mind. I know it's not much of a consolation but, know that you're not alone in the feeling. I understand it much more than I'd care to and I'm sure others do, too. On a side note, it made me smile to see a pretty face. :P
    | Posted on 2010-11-07 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]


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