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    dots Submission Name: elbows and kneesdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       written about carrying my angel(:


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    dotselbows and kneesdots
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    waking up at midnight
    with a jab to my ribs and sides,
    I sit up with wonder
    how a girl so tiny can go for such a ride.

    I feel the tightening of a angel
    how she laughs at my pain.
    I turn every time searching for comfort
    and repeating her entire name.

    "Holly Jean Maria Elizabeth Vrolyks
    you need to behave."
    but to my not so surprise
    it's my breath I should of saved.

    I call her father and complain.
    I rub her to sleep
    but only for a second before I feel
    those tiny elbows and knees.




    Submitted on 2010-11-07 17:40:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is really sweet, and i agree that its a long name. but its a beautiful name. congrats&goodluck
    | Posted on 2010-11-09 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      This is cute and decently written. I like that, though fairly obvious, you don't outright say it's about the child your carrying... and that is QUITE a long name! :P I thought my having two middle names was bad.
    | Posted on 2010-11-07 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]


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