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    dots Submission Name: Hills of Irelanddots
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    Author: cherrywillow
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 29/47/32
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHills of Irelanddots
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    On and on,
    where the green grass grows,
    where shadows from white
    clouds fly gently above us.

    On and on,
    where my dreams
    are cast,where I
    lie forever in your arms.

    On and on
    where the wise women
    chant, hand in hand
    circling and laughing.

    On and on,
    where I belong,
    with a ring upon my finger,
    with a smile upon your face.

    On and on,
    standing together,
    staring out to an amazing sight.
    The rolling green hills of Ireland.




    Submitted on 2010-11-08 19:22:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it really made me thing of endless rolling hills.. goodjob, i really liked this.
    | Posted on 2010-11-09 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      This is delightful, and paints strong word pictures!

    Nice work!
    | Posted on 2010-11-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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