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    dots Submission Name: Suppose 2 B Your Daydots
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    Author: Thornful Rose
    ASL Info:    23-female-California
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 141/186/49
    Words: 317
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 440
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    Bytes: 1994



    Description:
       poetry in memory of my mama Melanie Jean Coury


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    dotsSuppose 2 B Your Daydots
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    Today suppose to be your day but physically you're not here
    Yet you never truly went away, you're always somewhere;
    Whether it be in Harlow and Cruz's veins
    In Hayley's everlasting beauty,
    Dancing barefoot on the moon with flowers in your hair,... See More
    Or in each glance whrn I catch a peice of you in my reflection.
    I'm a mirror image of your beauty, but so much more;
    Your strength, power individuality,and peircing honesty,
    Sometimes more than most can handle
    Today is supposed to be your day,
    but physically you're not here, but really you never truly went away...
    You're always somewhere; whether it be covered in tie-dye in your kitchen,
    or ecased in the crystal around my neck
    You've molded me into the woman you once were, icluding all your attributes, like your love of music and it's true meaning
    The bells on your ankles and rings on your toes which conducts music wherever you go...
    You're not here, but you are in one way or another
    Today is your day, regardless of your physical presence
    You'll always be my meandring Mel,
    My brown eyed girl,
    My sugar magnolia, and my source of individuality, strength, and willingness to pierce with honesty, regardless if others can take it or not
    Today is your day, no matter if you're in my arms or not
    You made me who I am
    Whether it be in your lifetime ,
    Or the life I made after
    I am you , loud and outspoken,
    and I wouldn't have it any other way
    Today is your day...
    HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!!!
    And I know you're here in one way or another
    I miss you my hippie mama
    SAVE ME A SPACE ON YOUR MOONLIT DANCE FLOOR
    I WILL BRING MY OWN BEGONIA FOR MY HAIR
    I love you mama Melanie
    DANCE IN PEACE AND PLAY TRICKS ON WHO YOU CAN FROM UP THERE.




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