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    dots Submission Name: Missing Medots
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    Author: Runes
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 790/815/281
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       inspired by CLAYMAN


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    dotsMissing Medots
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    I used to be so naive.
    I used to love so carelessly.
    Have you seen my used-to-be?
    I need to find her...

    I gave my heart with certainty,
    trusting each lover completely.
    But now I know fragility...
    Please help me find her.

    The monsters underneath the bed
    have crawled inside, they're in my head
    and blocked the light with darkened dread...
    I've got to find her.

    She doesn't know the subtle way
    these fires are set, or how to say
    Goodbye in time to walk away
    before her hands get burned...

    She thinks Love can be learned
    if she just stays...

    I used to be so naive,
    gave my heart so foolishly
    mistaking Valentines for Love
    and mocking birds for turtle doves...

    She's only doing what she's seen
    me do before, she's lost in dreams
    and can't hear all my desperate screams
    of sound conviction...

    If you see her before me,
    tell her that we need to speak...
    She's still ideal and just too weak
    without my protection.




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      theres a part of me i hid
    and still it's something that i hide
    my hallmark hearts been ripped apart
    and i'm left with ink wounds on the inside

    it stings something like cold wind
    it hurts something like a wound
    to know that these ideals
    help me last, but hurt me soon

    i try to live my life
    and play by every rule
    never seems to work out right
    i just end up being fooled

    sometimes i feel like i'm oragami
    sometimes i make too many mistakes
    i bend myself ridiculously
    people never forget to hold grudges
    or notate misnomers
    when i don't think the same way
    i guess this is called growing up
    but man it's so fvcking ghey.
    | Posted on 2011-01-05 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
       You have scooped the flavors of my brain and placed them atop a thin wafer of perfection. I am lapping it up.
    | Posted on 2010-12-16 00:00:00 | by Narna | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. you still rock.
    | Posted on 2010-11-21 00:00:00 | by Theophilus | [ Reply to This ]
      This.. I am speechless...








    (tried a few approaches, still winds down to that line...)

    ok...

    "She doesn't know the subtle way
    these fires are set, or how to say
    Goodbye in time to walk away
    before her hands get burned..."

    Most meaningful verse i have read in ages, this resonates with a painful truth that is something not to be faced lest you become consumed..

    what can I say....

    Speechless..
    | Posted on 2010-11-10 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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