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    dots Submission Name: I said..dots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 995
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    Description:
       Suicide is not chosen; it happens
    when pain exceeds
    resources for coping with pain.

    Suicide is never only physical and death is not always involved..

    Inspired by Runes


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    dotsI said..dots
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    I saw her face sliding over the side of my blade,
    she smiled and said hi, as she joined the crusade.
    I said "baby, you are like the moon mid-parade,
    a black quiver of promises with games unplayed.

    but

    Behind this armor lies a guard, remnant of a shard,
    a soul splayed by her majesties gathered from afar."
    She said "honey you can trust my disguise, any part,
    inside lies but crushed dust, the gears of my heart.

    but

    You seem like a fine man, fit for a kings caravan,
    won't you join my side in this confusing timespan?"
    I said "you admit disdain and act wracked in pain,
    but baby I have to kill you, to stay stained sane."

    but...

    I said "baby I can try to write the winter from your eyes
    but we are both standing here with pockets full of lies,
    trying to convince the sun and moon to become promises
    where we ourselves sprinkled sharpened wishes."

    She stood stuck but unstruck, nodded and waved,
    I walked away happy knowing time has been saved..

    -Svw







    Submitted on 2010-11-10 06:18:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can try to write the winter from your eyes...

    That's really all any man can promise and actually deliver on, I think... but you know how I think :) And I think this is wonderful... thank you.

    Take care of me/you while I'm in you/me, and I'll try to do the same on this side of the world...

    Have you ever heard the Indigo Girls' song, Love's Recovery... it has everything I think about this in it. If I said more about what I think,, my thoughts would just be a plagiarism of this song, most likely.







    | Posted on 2010-11-10 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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