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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 421
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsHi, How Are You?dots
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    Hi how are you
    How are things
    Haven’t seen you in awhile
    How’s the kids
    How’s your mother doing
    I hope she’s fine
    And your sister and brothers
    Wow it really has been along time

    I am okay
    Can’t complain
    Life is good
    Yet it’s a strain
    I am happy
    I met someone new
    He is gorgeous
    And sexy too

    Oh you didn’t know
    You didn’t hear
    That I came out the closet
    Wow it’s been years
    It’s cool though
    Cause I am in love
    And only God can judge me
    From Heaven above

    Okay than I have to go
    Busy life you know
    But stop on by again
    I really like your smile
    Damn this mirror is dirty
    Haven’t cleaned it in awhile…




    Submitted on 2010-11-10 15:29:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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