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    dots Submission Name: The way I amdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 916
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1161



    Description:
       Because of you Case, i don't feel so alone,or so lonely or so not prefect!


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    dotsThe way I amdots
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    my hair isn't straight.
    my smile isn't as bright
    my eyes aren't beautiful.
    my face isn't just right.

    My body has some curves.
    my feet are prefect to me.
    my laugh isn't a giggle.
    my mouth doesn't stay shut it seems.

    I don't sing like an angel
    I don't have the prefect look
    you can't tell what I'm like
    you can't read my thoughts like a book.

    he loves the way my hair curls.
    he loves the way I try not to smile.
    He says my eye are amazingly green.
    and my face is worth the while.

    He says my body rocks.
    he says my feet are so small.
    he laughs when i laugh.
    and loves that I don't keep it in at all.

    He sings just as badly as me.
    says I'm prefect enough for him.
    He can see when i'm upset
    and knows where my heart has been.

    and I'm lucky to have him.
    his love hit me like Bam!
    and he loves me for me.
    He loves who I am.







    Submitted on 2010-11-11 12:29:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow i like it a lot.......and i m just like u
    | Posted on 2011-07-23 00:00:00 | by afra | [ Reply to This ]


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