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    dots Submission Name: For The First Timedots
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    Author: Katherine_Music
    ASL Info:    21/F/NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 17/18/11
    Words: 268
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 449
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1908



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    dotsFor The First Timedots
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    Chorus:
    I'm not acting silly
    For the first time
    I feel like I'm falling
    For the first time
    I like this feeling
    This person I've become
    Just from feeling this
    For the first time

    For the first time
    I sat there that night
    Held a conversation
    And didn't get crazy
    That's never happened before

    For the first time
    I felt comfortable in my own skin
    And I didn't need anything
    Expect that look
    That you were giving me

    Chorus:
    I'm not acting silly
    For the first time
    I feel like I'm falling
    For the first time
    I like this feeling
    This person I've become
    Just from feeling this
    For the first time

    For the first time
    I've held a smile
    And kept it for a while
    I like this change
    Can we keep it this way

    For the first time
    I've been completely myself
    And you accept me as that
    You stood in that place
    And gave me that look again

    Chorus:
    I'm not acting silly
    For the first time
    I feel like I'm falling
    For the first time
    I like this feeling
    This person I've become
    Just from feeling this
    For the first time

    Bridge:
    That look
    That very look
    That smile that I kept
    It's you
    I never knew that I could feel like this
    But now I am
    For the first time

    Chorus: (2x)
    I'm not acting silly
    For the first time
    I feel like I'm falling
    For the first time
    I like this feeling
    This person I've become
    Just from feeling this
    For the first time.




    Submitted on 2010-11-11 12:53:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That's your opinion, but I love it. I am not chancing it because ONE person doesn't like it. Sorry, if you didn't like it don't read it.
    | Posted on 2012-01-11 00:00:00 | by Katherine_Music | [ Reply to This ]
      Honestly, the line, "for the first time" seems repeated too much. And I see it is a song...so I especially think that if you sang that, then it would be really annoying to hear that repeated over and over again.
    | Posted on 2010-11-15 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


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