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    dots Submission Name: Paraphernalia dots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1089/408/117
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
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       Someone told me I should lighten up .


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    One of the most humorous conditions that a creature could burden itself with is a somnambulant desire to be to it's own liking . Maxillary extrapolation although a positive political expectorant is likewise a practical partiality . I prefer to be philanthropically phenological although rational impedance is my histophysiology . My present participle is practical pragmatism and tertiary transcendentalism . Xenoplasticly speaking I feel alone but plausibility is a probationer in reflective self awareness . Atrociously impetuous I proceeded amidst heinously horrendous heckledom . Adequate inflection is a relevant relative to retaliatory regression but I digress . Paraphernalia is a practitioner to plausibility's cause and should be assimilated through cognizance not perfunctory preferentialism .
    Hegelian humanitarianism must supersede political subterfugalism or all may be lost in quagmire .




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      Ahh, you actually write for either the .5% on the right side of the bell curve or those like me who enjoy trying to squeeze his fat and now lumpy head in towards that most narrow space. The nice thing is that with any luck I might remember some part of the vocabulary items I took the time to look up the meaning of. You are a harsh taskmaster! Is there a "safeword" here?
    | Posted on 2011-03-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      when i think of paraphernalia i usually think papers. that may just be the stoner in me. but who knows.

    i have read a couple of your writes, and honestly, a lot of it goes over my head. or it's more that i stumble over the vocab (not to say that's a bad thing, it's just that i am rather limited). so it takes work. (because i have to look words up. and sometimes i am just plain lazy and don't feel like doing it). (again, a fault of my own).

    i will tell you what i do like. you write for yourself and not necessarily to the general public and i admire that.

    anyhoo...
    | Posted on 2010-11-15 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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