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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots
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    Author: Thornful Rose
    ASL Info:    23-female-California
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 141/186/49
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 380
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    Description:
       a mood I was in...


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    dotsLifedots
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    Life is heartbreak,
    Life is pain.
    Life walks a road,
    overgrown with haze.

    Life is beautiful,
    Life is ugly.
    Life is whatever,
    you decide to paint it.

    Life is wild,
    Life is tame.
    Life is a tournament,
    you never know your rank.

    Life is family,
    life is blame.
    Life is standing up,
    and claiming your place.

    Life is friends,
    Life is love.
    Life is your heart,
    that controls your head.

    Life is unpredictable,
    Life is routine.
    Life is the schedule,
    you can't seem to keep.

    Life is danger,
    Life is safe.
    Life is defined by,
    the mistakes you make.

    Life is yours as much as mine.
    Life comes in all shapes and sizes.
    Life is birth and then it's death.
    Life is whatever the birth and death have left.

    Life is everything even if you do nothing with it.
    But a life of nothing is not really living.




    Submitted on 2010-11-13 03:05:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thats a lot of life! But beautifully written. we can [censored] and complain all we want... but in the end it is only yourself that put you wherever you are. Great job.
    | Posted on 2010-11-14 00:00:00 | by Jessa | [ Reply to This ]


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