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    dots Submission Name: Hushdots
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    Author: keyverse
    Elite Ratio:    4.97 - 9/6/6
    Words: 418
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    When did communication
    Become so heavily reliant on vocalization
    We’re always in conversation yet,
    I wonder why we don’t speak
    So hush
    Listen to the sweetest words ever spoken
    Like secrets on the wind
    Is your and my heart beat
    Conversing in tones
    That entreats us to laconism
    Words are too, course too crass
    They lack the elegance of silence
    So relinquish your moving lips to the perfect pitch of a kiss
    Let me, cascade in your thoughts and kiss your mental
    Pass the gateways of your eyes to make love in a temple
    Because love, is sacred
    And your mind, is a temple
    There in-between your temples
    See how communication can be so simple
    Without the complications of intonations
    That hardly relay what we’re actually trying to say
    Lets just play on each others skin
    And watch the melanin tell…
    slave narratives, and the biographies of ancient Egyptians
    my body is ready to listen
    cuz your touch turns my feeling to vision
    its like you have hieroglyphs at your fingertips
    Intermittent with the key to ecstasy
    But, just as the gates open
    The instance is broken
    The instant words are spoken
    Please…
    Hold ya tongue
    And save the breath in your lungs
    To oxygenize the blood vessels that will rush
    To your cheeks when you flush from my touch
    The most powerful way to profess your love
    Is in silence
    Forsaking the words of the unfaithful
    For the stillness of the true
    So hush
    Let not your tongue
    Bleed the passion of fools
    There’s nothing to be said that is not already felt
    And if silence is golden than let’s enjoy the wealth…
    In silence
    So simple
    So pure
    Close the doors of locution
    Until those soliloquies come seeping from your pores
    And you shed tears from your inability to express how you feel
    This is more real than any simile or metaphor
    Prose yields to the poetry of repose
    So lets engross ourselves in a conversation so grave
    that it sends chills through our minds
    And curls our Souls
    Emotions in the fetal position
    Let’s give birth to true amore
    In silence
    Hush
    Feel how deep the stillness goes
    Close your eyes and listen to the moans that your spirit compose
    A symphony of tactility
    still pictures of pleasure on your face
    measures the pace of your heart like a silent metronome
    Steady and consistent
    The beat is there if you’d listen
    Hush…!
    And lets consummate this moment,
    With a moment,
    Of silence…





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