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    dots Submission Name: Bittered Piecesdots
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    Author: stefhy
    ASL Info:    21/f/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 165/83/37
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 529
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 861



    Description:
       Just had to whip something up really, found so many great old pieces that I wrote in my notebook and forgot about....
    None of them finished, but I like some of them a lot.... I wanted to use it.

    ... I don't think it did it justice.


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    dotsBittered Piecesdots
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    You'd love me most if I were small
    Broken in your fist, I crawl
    A crumbled mess inside your palm
    Where every step I take I fall

    Instead, I lay inside your eyes
    Just the fool of all your lies
    Slave of all that makes me cry
    Not the wreck you want this time.


    A voices crack is heard too loud
    During hushes in the crowd
    Even when no one's around
    All your love is far too proud

    Still we walk inside the moon
    We're waiting for the night, too soon
    I can't resist your heartbreaks tune
    Under your blade, I dare to swoon.


    I laced my fingers into yours,
    And sewed your name into my core
    Followed your footsteps on the floor
    until I saw them all, no more.





    Submitted on 2010-11-14 03:02:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was quite interesting. very good job putting everything into place. keep it up. glad to see another post from you.
    -aaron
    | Posted on 2010-11-27 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this write. i'm speechless

    Buster
    | Posted on 2010-11-24 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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