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    dots Submission Name: Believedots
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    Author: Jessa
    ASL Info:    29/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 221/209/73
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 562
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1074



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       Just when you think your already dead... someone can always bring you back... if you let them.


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    dotsBelievedots
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    It took a man, a real man
    To crawl through the depths of another broken soul
    He was beaten and bruised from the very beginning
    conquering and sweeping aside anything in his way
    Only making him a REAL man

    A broken girl, older than a woman
    Not by age, but by life itself
    Swimming in the darkness with broken arms
    Creatures, one by one, biting off their share of food
    Knowing her body has been claimed,
    She stopped and let her arms afloat to look up at an empty sky

    Another set of arms reached for her lifeless body
    Another set of empty eyes locked into hers
    The empty sky turned red with hate
    The waters turned and waves rolled over
    But he held on despite her last breath

    Two worlds collide between the now and then
    A break in the laws of nature
    The very touch of one TRUE man
    and the beaten sorrow of an elder girl


    Forgiveness is the way to another life



    Jessa Lynn




    Submitted on 2010-11-14 12:56:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      In the end, Hate seems vivid, but Forgiveness is what lack in most souls, yet your poem reminds me how I need to believe. Thanks.
    | Posted on 2010-11-26 00:00:00 | by Apteryx | [ Reply to This ]
      Loved the end "Forgiveness is the way to another life" I believe in forgiveness we all find freedom from pain and punishment to ourselves and others, liberating us to a new life. Well put.
    John
    | Posted on 2010-11-16 00:00:00 | by bigohhh1 | [ Reply to This ]


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