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    dots Submission Name: I Hate to Love Youdots
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    Author: darkness child
    ASL Info:    21/F/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 195/266/48
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 438
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 544



    Description:
       The people you love have such an amazing ability to hurt you.


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    dotsI Hate to Love Youdots
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    I trusted you
    Because you needed me to,
    And I thought I could
    Believe in you,
    But my fears ended up
    Being true.
    And now I'm left
    So confused because
    Even though you say you
    Love me, you
    Kill me a little more
    Everyday, and
    It seems like love
    Isn't worth having if
    It hurts so much.
    You defile my soul
    With every vicious thing
    You say, and I
    Can't breathe from
    How much I hate to love you.




    Submitted on 2010-11-15 00:45:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I believe everyone knows this feeling.... To hate to love someone and to not understand why we are sooo seemingly addicted to their lack of love. You got your point across. Thanks, JohnOhh
    | Posted on 2010-11-16 00:00:00 | by bigohhh1 | [ Reply to This ]


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