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    dots Submission Name: Estimation.dots
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    Author: xxiknownowxx
    ASL Info:    16/F/GA
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 128/41/40
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsEstimation.dots
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    I settled for an unperceived manner. I walked
    Their walk, and I saw their words fashioned
    In the metal frame nailed across their foreheads. It
    Appears so palpable to me. The cracks you consign in the most
    Unobserved places that I see
    Beyond. And even further, all too well.
    I walked across,
    Hoping you wouldn’t understand my undermanaged
    sighs. I’ve already stolen what’s so dear to me.




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