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    dots Submission Name: Shouldn't Feel Saddots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsShouldn't Feel Saddots
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    I have hurt throughout my life
    I had felt the edge of sorrow
    As I looked through my soul as I attempted suicide
    Yet I lived to see another tomorrow

    I have been used, left & abused
    Yelled at, beaten & bruised
    Burnt, whipped, and punched
    With nothing left to lose

    I had my share of pain and rejection
    Suicidal thoughts
    Were my distractions

    I have been bullied and tormented
    Left in the rain and in the dark
    Scared, broken & wounded
    But yet there’s a spark

    I have been though a lot in my life
    More than anyone my age should have
    But I know everything’s going to be alright
    So you shouldn’t feel sad…

    S.H.




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