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    dots Submission Name: Life is Lifedots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsLife is Lifedots
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    Life is life
    what else can i say
    you left me before i could get a chance to press play
    love is love
    that's a lie
    the one you think is right
    ends up putting you up
    playin' with your mind
    Making you think your his only.
    Love is lust that's a fact
    you end up giving up EVERYTHING,
    you take a chance
    not living for tomorrow
    just that night
    lust leads to cheating
    in most cases.
    you leave for a week
    not knowing who else was in your bed.
    You were faithful but was he
    more then likely not.
    cheating to nothing
    nothing to something
    something from that night
    now i hold a baby girl in my arms
    but hey
    Life is life
    what else can i say!




    Submitted on 2010-11-17 13:05:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Life is Good! No matter how bad it gets.
    | Posted on 2010-11-26 00:00:00 | by Apteryx | [ Reply to This ]


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