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    dots Submission Name: who isnt me dots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotswho isnt me dots
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    My love, my dear
    you were the one
    you took love and pain
    and made the son
    the son she gave birth too
    meaning your son
    you cheated and lied
    i was your wife
    we have a daughter
    and now she has a brother
    who's mother isnt me!




    Submitted on 2010-11-17 13:15:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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