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    dots Submission Name: Cheatingggdots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 246
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsCheatingggdots
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    forever you say as you walk away
    you leave to go back to school that day
    when you kiss me goodbye
    i have a tear in my eye
    you wipe it off my Face and said it was ok
    only three months and we shall be together agian
    as i saw you get on that plane
    i said i beleive you
    you called me when you got off the plane
    then said you had to go
    everynight you called me to say goodnight
    and the late nights you say you need sleep
    as weeks go by you start calling less and less
    you say u are busy
    with your schooling and stuff
    i didnt start to worry till that day
    Facebook
    I got a message from a girl
    " stop putting shit on my boyfriends page"
    I sat there and thought
    whatt she talking about
    I wrote back
    You talking about johnny??
    and then i logged off!
    I called my baby back that night
    Hey baby whats up how is your night ?
    He sounded he was around people
    he said he was working
    When did he get a job?
    Well baby good night have to go now!
    I sit bak and think what to think now i know my boy is cheating and beating my heart in to stone.!




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