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    dots Submission Name: cowboydots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 496
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 888



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    dotscowboydots
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    I saw you last night
    in the arms of another woman
    I guess you couldn't see me
    the lights at the bar aren't to bright I guess
    you danced with her all night
    you whispered in her ear
    and you kissed her pretty mouth
    your hands never strayed from her back
    and your eyes never left her face
    now im not one for big scenes
    so I shut my mouth and watched
    it took all my strength to sit there
    cause you had just promised me
    you would never stray
    oh how your promises look like lies in the dim light
    now who do I have to hold at night?
    you took away your love without telling me
    but then again you were always mysterious
    now I know better
    next time I see a cowboy i'll look the other way
    cause so far, they've brought me nothing but pain.




    Submitted on 2010-11-18 13:58:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I wanna use that "like" button too! This put a smile on my face, I could see everything happening. Awesome write, it kinda made my nite.
    | Posted on 2010-12-01 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      If there was a "like" button, I would like this.
    You have to hate loving a cowboy, yet when they actually love you, for that moment..Isn't it almost worth it?
    | Posted on 2010-11-19 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]


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