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    dots Submission Name: Pray Think Remeberdots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 377
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1384



    Description:
       A poem Inspired By Justin Bieber's Pray and My Oceanography class


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    dotsPray Think Remeberdots
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    Green, Blue, Brown
    Our earth’s signature colors
    Look closer and you can see rainbows of color
    Look around creatures big, small, cute, and ugly everywhere
    Some people enjoy earths colors other enjoy creatures that we can almost or never understand
    But you don’t have to be far to see our sky’s turn black
    Our planet’s colors turn dull
    The people turn cold along with unnatural murderous winters
    The deserts burn hotter
    The love of our planet melts with the ice caps
    Our waters unnaturally slick of mans accidents
    The number of people who care are as great as the gold and diamonds
    Precious but rare
    Do we want a home where people and animals die because our natural disasters become more unnatural?
    Or because our trash can’t go into a can?
    The greed and envy that surrounds us is as common as the trees we cut down
    They say “together we can help”
    How together are we when we can’t get along and we kill each other?
    It can get better
    Just do your part
    Recycle, reuse and we can replenish
    Replenish the world that can’t heal if we keep wounding it
    God will step in
    But till then
    Save what we can
    Pray, think, and remember
    We can make our world
    A better place





    Submitted on 2010-11-18 14:44:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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