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    dots Submission Name: Carebear, we're still sister!dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 1010
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I miss hanging out with you.


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    dotsCarebear, we're still sister!dots
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    Do you remeber when we found that bird?
    How we tried to keep it alive?
    Then in one second it's heartbeat stopped
    and it was gone?

    Do you remeber when we got those scooters?
    How we drove mom up the wall?
    Us showing off, falling, getting back on.
    I swear I think we were just crazy.

    Do you remeber those hamster we had?
    How those little suckers reproduced.
    I gave you most of mine
    really I hated their smell.


    Do you remeber how you held me when
    Micheal broke my heart?
    You told me there will be others.
    and there were. how'd you know that?

    Do you remeber how I looked up at you?
    I still do. Now in a different way.
    I can't wait to be a good mom like you.
    I can't wait for our daughters to be like us.

    Carebear we're still sister.
    we still got the same blood in our veins.
    We might of changed over the years
    but our friendships still the same.





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      Yes, Sweetheart.
    We are.

    I miss you, why don't you call?
    | Posted on 2011-10-23 00:00:00 | by Carosuel | [ Reply to This ]


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