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    dots Submission Name: Childhooddots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsChildhooddots
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    I use to dream of dreams, “why am I here?”
    Stood by the door, listening with my ear,
    I hope to get a sign, at least a message from God,
    But I got nothing, everything came to a halt.

    As time pass by, I finally found my will to live,
    Now I know the reasons to give.
    I did not found Him, but He found me,
    He was always here, now I can finally see.

    He – Jesus Christ (My God and Savior)




    Submitted on 2010-11-18 18:55:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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