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    dots Submission Name: Mountaindots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       I'm living the dream... all thanks to you


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    dotsMountaindots
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    I see the mountain I was meant to climb
    my feet belong in these holes here.
    I see its peek and I know it'll be challenging
    So I'll visualize the day I graduate college
    The day I begin helping kids as a Social Worker
    This will help me get threw the rough days
    As will you baby..
    Always there to cheer me on!
    By my side to keep me strong
    To keep me in check

    If I happen to loose my footing thats okay
    I know you'll be there
    I know you'll help me up
    Youll give me courage
    And on my way again

    To climb this mountain I was meant to climb all along
    With the Man who was meant to be there for me ..
    All Along <3




    Submitted on 2010-11-19 08:58:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You go girl! The mountaintops are where Earth and Heaven meet!
    | Posted on 2010-11-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem already climbed it for you!
    | Posted on 2010-11-26 00:00:00 | by Apteryx | [ Reply to This ]
      You give humanity way too much credit!
    | Posted on 2010-11-20 00:00:00 | by Jessa | [ Reply to This ]


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