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    dots Submission Name: Living Now and Everdots
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    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsLiving Now and Everdots
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    And I noticed myself,
    Weak and all that that entails.

    Fall down and weep I did not but in my mind,
    And so the question is this:
    Is weeping in the mind any less Real
    Or is more?




    Submitted on 2010-11-21 15:20:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is short but sweet, for sure. I like the question it brings. :) Well written.
    | Posted on 2010-11-24 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


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