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    dots Submission Name: Buying End Timedots
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    Author: col13x
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    Oh biblical times of doomsday
    Reek the vengeance of God upon the earth
    And I have invested and dedicated
    All propaganda, programming and political means to the end time

    Oh arrogant mind of little earth
    To think that God should manifest solely to you
    Amidst all the stars of an infinite Universe
    And all the finite aspects of itself

    Armageddon ! By divine will
    And upon the evil that you do
    Shall judge me, as it judges you
    With the violence, belief leads them to

    Leave a letter to your loved ones
    To tell them where you have gone
    The rapture has taken you
    And you’re sorry, but they will never enter heaven

    The vindication of millions and millions of dollars
    The churches gluttony for our souls
    Such arrogance in the blind self-righteous
    To think that God, is not the God of us all

    And every human’s blood runs the same colour
    And every human heart knows love
    Each one of us, the worlds sister or brother
    Deny this, and deny the word, the creation, of God

    Religious fundamentalism
    Is nothing more than mental fascism
    Awash with blood and the great tribulation
    With the love of Jesus, completely forgotten

    Oh arrogant mind of little earth
    To think that God should manifest solely to you
    Amidst all the stars of an infinite Universe
    And all the finite aspects of itself




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      I'm agreeing your points . Armageddon is a joke . In fact organized religion is pretty much a joke in general . Even pantheism is a view beyond logistical culmination . To think at one time christians believed the world was flat and we were the center of the universe . Your fourth verse epitomizes the lunacy real well . When I think of the validity of the fifth verse I could positively become a member of the arrogant blind self righteous . Fortunately , like you , I realize the human need for spiritualism . What we need is a deontological epiphany . Where the love of Jesus is lauded for the probity of humanitarianism it human enigma represented . Maybe then we wouldn't so easily forget how seemingly insignificant and infinitesimal we really are . Or how badly we need a VIABLE unifying creed .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2010-11-22 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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