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    dots Submission Name: Everything's Okay (Online Version)dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsEverything's Okay (Online Version)dots
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    You didn't hear me when I called your name
    Or covered me from the rain
    Or tried to stop me from fall, fall, falling
    Not even a single sor, sor, sorry

    Everything's okay
    At least that's what I say
    Maybe I need to stop lying
    To myself
    And start trying
    Looking somewhere else

    Everything's okay
    I tell myself that
    It gets me through the day
    In fact
    When you don't apologize
    I pass on by
    Ignore what you should have said
    Everything's okay, no everything's dead

    S.H.




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