Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Everything's Okay (Online Version)dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 717
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 645



    Description:
       The original is from my upcoming poem book!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsEverything's Okay (Online Version)dots
    -------------------------------------------


    You didn't hear me when I called your name
    Or covered me from the rain
    Or tried to stop me from fall, fall, falling
    Not even a single sor, sor, sorry

    Everything's okay
    At least that's what I say
    Maybe I need to stop lying
    To myself
    And start trying
    Looking somewhere else

    Everything's okay
    I tell myself that
    It gets me through the day
    In fact
    When you don't apologize
    I pass on by
    Ignore what you should have said
    Everything's okay, no everything's dead

    S.H.




    Submitted on 2010-11-22 16:03:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    187960

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Carry written by saartha
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Where? written by ParanoidParadox
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    untitled written by ShyOne
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    no words for how graceful you are in this moment written by Daniel Barlow
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    the testing of hypotheses written by Daniel Barlow
    Records I written by Raphael
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Silent Screams In Silent Dreams written by poetotoe
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Cover written by saartha
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Fasade written by jackz
    Love written by saartha
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    You read free written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry